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雅思A类写作小作文*范文,本次小作文题为柱状图,有关2001年至2008年间某国家的不同产品在家庭中的比例。


10月28日的雅思考试已经结束,现在为大家带来*雅思写作小作文*范文。下面请看雅思写作小作文详解及A类小作文范文。


雅思写作A类小作文参考范文

小作文


类型


柱图


题目


The chart below shows the percentages of household in one country that had various goods in then years 2001 and 2008.


Summarizing the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant.


Household having various goods 2001 and 2008


表格说的是dishwsher washing machine, tumble dryer, home computer, satellite  or cable TV, CD players, microwave oven, mobile phone and home telephone 的比例变化。


范文解析


解析:本题为多柱图。由于商品类别比较多,且涉及到两年的数据,因此柱子的数目比较多。考生在处理这类考题时,需要突出重点信息,例如*和*的柱子,以及各部分数值变化的相似特征;以便在有限的篇幅和时间达到考点。切忌过多或者详细描述各个品项的排名。


*表达(范文中已用红色标注)


compares the percentage of


比较…的比例


In general, it is noticeable that…


总的来说,很明显的是…


Similarly, the significant rise was also seen in the rate of


类似的,…也有明显的增长


On the contrary


相反的


gain less popularity


受欢迎程度(比例)下降


time frame


时间段


Overall, it is interesting to note that…


总之,有趣的是


lost people’s favor


失去人们的喜爱(比例下降)


prevalence


流行


范文


The bar chart compares the percentage of diverse commodities owned by households in a certain country in the years 2001 and 2008.


In general, it is noticeable that in both years, washing machine was so welcomed that the figure for it was the highest with 98% and * respectively; while, the least proportion of families had dish washer, at only 30% and 40% separately.


Regarding to other items, it is not hard to find that their possession rate experienced an increase during this period, especially cable TV whose percent almost doubled from 43% to 82%. Similarly, the significant rise was also seen in the rate of home computer and mobile phone, climbing by approximately 15%. On the contrary, tumble dryer, CD player and microwave oven gained less popularity in the same time frame as their rate grew slightly by 5%.


Overall, it is interesting to note that despite the home telephone which lost people’s favor, other appliance as well as mobile phone enjoy rising prevalence over these seven years.




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