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雅思口语难题解析第三弹(二)

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  雅思口语难题解析第三弹(二)

  Describe your dream home

  You should say: What it will be Where you want to live What kind of your dream home is And explain why you want to live in it

  

题目分析:

  雅思培训口语难题解析这个题目的要求非常单一,说简单点,就是以描述房子的构造和样貌为主,一个典型的事物样貌描述类的题。这类题目最大的挑战就是要非常有条理的把目标事物描述出来,不能乱无目的地说。考生要尝试在脑中建立一个房子模型,并且通过对房子的描述让考官也能在脑中想象出来这个房子的大概模样。题目中间穿插着对于地点的描述等,但那并不会占多少篇幅。最后不要忘了还要重点描述一下你想要住在这样的房子中的原因,可以从外部环境和内部装饰和构造等两方面入手。当然如果考生们有自己独特的想法更好,这样肯定能有话讲,不会大脑一片空白。我们给大家两篇范文作为参考,一篇描述的是公寓,另一篇是大多数同学选择描述的house,我们将会一一分析。

  Sample1: My dream home, well, would be way different from what others might dream of. And I would like to have my dream home in an apartment located in the center of a metropolis, say Shanghai, Beijing or New York.   From a very young age, I’ve been looking forward to living in a modern city, because I’m always fascinated by the energetic, dynamic and charming soul of big cities. So from that time, I started dreaming about living in such a place and enjoying the vitality of city. Well, I would like to have my home located in a high apartment building, at around 15th floor where I can have a bird view of the city and stay away from the noise down on the streets.  I’d like to have three to four bedrooms: one for me, one for my parents if they would like to live with me, and two for friends or families coming for a visit. Besides, a spacious living room with big French windows would be terrific. I just can’t help imagining lying on my soft sofa, with a cup of tea in hand, and feeling the warmth of the sunshine on my skin. Isn’t it cozy? Above that, I’d particularly like to have a fairly large kitchen where I can stay at least for six hours every day. I enjoy cooking so much, not only because of the great sense of achievement I can get from the smiles of people when they eat my food, but because cooking is a process when I should only concentrate on my food. In other words, staying in the kitchen and focusing on my cooking help to clear my mind off.  Speaking of why I’d like to have my dream home in an apartment, I think I like the safety that living in apartment brings to me. I mean, first of all, surveillance system and access control system ensure the security of the building and dwellers to a certain extent. After that, a well-equipped apartment normally offers a gym with pool and a media room for public use, so it’s quite convenient if I want to use such facilities. Finally, a special charm of an apartment is the convenient and efficient transport it has. Besides having a private parking lot for every dweller, an apartment often lies in a transportation hub, which means I can choose different modes of transport according to my needs. Overall, I have a quite huge commitment to city life, so I bet the apartment is the best choice for me.

  答案解析:这篇范文独树一帜,比较个性化的描述了一个位于市中心的apartment作为dream home。与大多数答案不同,我们并没有走田园风、享受岁月静好的路线,而是描述了一个大多数同学正在居住的房子类型,就是楼房。在中国,公寓房和普通住房是有区别的,但是英文都是apartment啦,所以没差,这不需要纠结。这篇范文就针对现代城市中楼房的配套设施和地段优势做了解释并说明他们的重要性。也是作者选择apartment的主要原因。除此之外,对于房间数量、类型和样式的描述都属于通用型答案,考生可以随时借鉴,也可以把他们稍微改编放到house的描述中去。  本篇范文的的重点表达有: ü bird view 鸟瞰 ü French windows 落地窗 ü sense of achievement 成就感 ü clear (my mind) off 清空(我的思绪) ü surveillance system 监控系统  ü access control system 门禁系统 ü well-equipped 配备良好的 ü parking lot 停车场(位) ü transportation hub 交通枢纽

  我们再来看一个范文,内容关于house,是大多数同学会选择的一种类型。

  Sample 2: As a person born in city, raised up in city and now living in city, I always dream about having my own detached house at a warm seaside place. After travelling to Bali, my experience of living in a seaside villa with a private pool is just engraved on my head, so I cannot help thinking about having such place as my own home.  I fancy a large yard where there is a private pool for fun in the summer, a small basketball court for my friends and me to have a little battle, and rows of green plants that can decorate and beautify my house. A yard is what I always want, because I’m able to have fun and enjoy my time, either on my own or with my friends or families, in the yard, my personal outside place. Apart from the yard, I’d like to have a two-story house with a large living room, a dining room and a gym on the ground floor, and four bedrooms on the first floor. Here I’d particularly like to talk about the gym. I’m a big fan of body shaping, and normally, I spend two hours working out in gym every day. I’m thinking that if I could have my personal gym, it would be fabulous because sometimes I have to share a popular facility with several other people, which really is a waste of time. Plus, I could equip the gym with media system, so it wouldn’t be boring when I’m working out on my own.  I dream to have my house at the seaside place because the sea always brings healing feeling to me. Just imagine: every day you can wake up with sea breeze and your first sight of the world is the broad ocean, not the cold and unified streets and buildings. It’s such a picture that you would never feel tired of. Apart from that, my city now is undergoing serious air contamination, which propels me to move to a rather clean place. So it’s no wonder why I dream to live at a seaside place where it tends to be less polluted.

  范文解析: 此篇范文描述了一个海边的二层独栋房子。在答案一开始,作者就根据自己的生活背景给出了想要一个海边的独栋房子的心情。接着作者描述了房子的大概构造,包括一个大庭院(yard),庭院里有游泳池、小型篮球场和成排的绿色植物,这不就是典型的在西方国家常见的中产阶级的房子构造吗。作者对这些场所都是简短介绍,然后重点介绍了房间的类型,尤其是健身房,结合自己的生活经验和兴趣,对健身房的存在给出了详细的解释。最后,作者就为什么喜欢住在海边这个话题展开了讨论,为听者展开了一幅想象的画面。这也是考生可以借鉴的一种描述方式,你的表达方式不一定需要非常高级,只需最简单的表达,引领你的听众进行想象,听众自然会更有一种代入感,对你所说的内容感同身受,这样更能赢得更高的分数。  本篇范文的重点表达有: ü detached house 独栋房子 ü be engraved on 铭记,雕刻在 ü yard庭院 ü two-story 两层的 ü ground floor一层 ü first floor二层 如果我们把一层叫做ground floor的话,此时二层就称作first floor ü healing 治愈的


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