但是若单纯从语句角度出发，考生在托福独立写作中语句不出错的同时，还应尽力提升语句的优美度与吸引力，如：越来越多刚刚毕业的大学生发现找到好工作是越来越难，此句几乎所有有一定英语基础的同学均能顺利地完成，但是差距肯定是不难发现的，如用more and more来表现越来越多还是用increasing number of来形容，或者是会出现… is difficult 还是使用it is句型等。笔者按照此句翻译的不同等级，由低到高进行排列：
More and more college graduates who have just graduated from university find that finding a good job is more and more difficult.
A growing number of fresh graduates find that obtaining a decent job is increasingly difficult.
A growing number of fresh graduates find that being employed by a decent employer is increasingly difficult.
The difficulty of being employed by a decent employer is on the rise, as the number of fresh graduates grows.
除此之外，要想在新托福独立写作中抓住考官的注意力，结合进高级表达方式是必不可少的。即使是简短的简单句，也要能写出精彩的表达；朗阁海外考试研究中心的建议考生们运用“变化主语”的方式来达到效果。如：在过去20年里，人们的沟通方式发生了巨大的变化。运用此方法就可以分别写出以人们为主语的句子：People communicated with others through various ways in the past 20 years. 也可以写出以方式为主语的句子：The way of communication changed a lot/ greatly in the past 2 decades; 以变化为主语：The huge change in people’s communication method took place in the past 20 years; 此外，还可以以时间为主语得出：The past 20 years witnessed a huge change in people’s communication type. 如此一来，平淡无奇也完全可以变为神奇。
而且还要学会用不同的句式来表达同一个意思的语句，一定要牢记多样性的要求。除了会写多彩的简单句之外，巧妙运用表示各种关系的连接词所达到的关系句也是十分推荐的。只需要在两个简单句中间加入关系词，如：as a result of, due to, despite, even though, however等（此类连词需要考生牢牢熟悉并掌握，不仅可以用于句式，更能放入文章，完成连贯性极高的结构）。
To Add: and, again, and then, besides, equally important, finally, further, furthermore, nor, too, next, lastly, what''s more, moreover, in addition, first (second, etc.)
To Compare: whereas, but, yet, on the other hand, however, nevertheless, on the other hand, on the contrary, by comparison, where, compared to, up against, balanced against, but, although, conversely, meanwhile, after all, in contrast, although this may be true
To Prove: because, for, since, for the same reason, obviously, evidently, furthermore, moreover, besides, indeed, in fact, in addition, in any case, that is
To Show Exception: yet, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, of course, once in a while, sometimes
To Show Time: immediately, thereafter, soon, after a few hours, finally, then, later, previously, formerly, first (second, etc.), next, and then
To Repeat in brief, as I have said, as I have noted, as has been noted
To Emphasize: definitely, extremely, obviously, in fact, indeed, in any case, absolutely, positively, naturally, surprisingly, always, forever, perennially, eternally, never, emphatically, unquestionably, without a doubt, certainly, undeniably, without reservation
To Show Sequence: first, second, third, and so forth. A, B, C, and so forth. next, then, following this, at this time, now, at this point, after, afterward, subsequently, finally, consequently, previously, before this, simultaneously, concurrently, thus, therefore, hence, next, and then, soon
To Give an Example: for example, for instance, in this case, in another case, on this occasion, in this situation, take the case of, to demonstrate, to illustrate, as an illustration, to illustrate