避免使用语意弱的“be”动词,朗阁雅思培训中心的老师认为,可以把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。
一、避免使用语意弱的“be”动词。
1、朗阁雅思培训中心的老师认为,可以把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。例如:
Weak: The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab. Revision:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语)
Or: The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (转换为并列结构作后置定语)
2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。例如:
1) Weak: The team members are good players.
Revision: The team members play well.
2) Weak: One worker''s plan is the elimination of tardiness.
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