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2019年5月23日雅思写作考题回顾

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本文总结了5月23日雅思考试的写作考题回顾,希望可以帮助大家更好的备考雅思考试。

Task 1

考试日期

2019523

类别

Bar

题目

The chart below shows the average snow depth in Canada during the 6 months. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

题目翻译

下图显示了加拿大6个月的平均雪深。通过选择和报告主要功能总结信息,并在相关的地方进行比较。

要素回忆(数据仅供参考)

柱状,横向为不同月份,纵向为下雪的深度刻度。要注意不同月份下雪深度之间的比较,也要注意相同月份在不同年份的比较。

 

写作指导

1. 注意时态,要用过去时

2. 可先分别不同月份下雪深度之间的比较(横向描写)

3. 在就相同月份在不同年份的比较(纵向描写)。

重点表达式

By briefly glancing at … it is apparent that …

The information in the … concludes that …

There was not a great deal of difference between...and...

what remains truly remarkable is that(引人注目的是)

It is evident when comparing …

…lead us to the conclusion that...

As can be seen from the …, great changes have taken place in...

It is clearly evident from the … that …

Through the information that is provided in the … we can learn that …

There were a lot of similarities between...and...

…had something in common with ...

题目评价

难度一般

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近三个月考的大多是线图、柱图和表格,根据以往经验,接下来几次需注意饼图流程图及地图。


Task 2

考试日期

2019523

类别

犯罪

题目

In many parts of the world children and teenagers are committing more crimes. Why is this case happening? How should children or teenagers be punished?

题目翻译

在世界的许多地方,儿童和青少年犯罪增多。为什么会发生这种情况?如何惩罚儿童或青少年?

写作指导

1. 注意时态,不要出现过去时(除非举过去的例子)

2. 注意审题,要重点突出越来越多的犯罪这一事实和趋势,然后要先分析其原因,再加以论述该如何惩罚儿童或青少年

 

推荐思路:段式

建议正文的前两段可以详细分析儿童和青少年犯罪增多的原因,再用一段来具体提出方案如何去惩罚儿童或青少年

 

 

Opening: 背景介绍,表明题目所指的写作要求

Body1:

学校道德教育的不重视和家庭教育的缺少导致孩子精神扭曲犯罪

Body2:

科技发展和传媒的不良信息促使青少年犯罪

Body3:

给孩子相应的道德和法律教育以及适当的一些社会劳动让他们反省悔过

写作范文

Nowadays, there are more and more reports of juvenile delinquency in many places. This phenomenon has aroused people's deep concern. There are many reasons for this, and we should adopt some reasonable and appropriate methods to punish these young people.

 

One of the most important reasons for more and more juvenile crimes is the lack of corresponding moral education and training. Nowadays, many schools regard achievements as a very important criterion for students' assessment, so they do not pay enough attention to the cultivation of students' morality. Schools always attach importance to academic performance, and some students suffer unfair treatment from teachers because of unsatisfactory performance. Besides, the pressure of competition among students is increasing, which also leads to many problems in children's mental health. Moreover, the lack of family education has also promoted more and more teenagers to commit crimes. Nowadays, many parents are busy with work, which leads to very little time for them to accompany their children. They give their children very limited companionship, care, and moral education.

 

Another very important reason is that the development of science and technology and the development of media have accelerated the seriousness of this problem to a certain extent. Because of the imperfect network system and inadequate auditing mechanism, some media will spread unhealthy information and content, such as violence, bloodshed, pornography and so on, for profit. Even in some common movies and TV dramas, producers will add some unhealthy content in order to be eye-catching. In the long run, children are exposed to such a social environment, which has a great negative impact on their mental health, and then lead to their psychological distortion on the road to crime.

 

The better punishment for these children is to give them some relevant moral knowledge and trainings on observing rules. Only with the ideological awareness and awareness of their own mistakes can it be possible to eradicate the crimes. Besides, they can also have appropriate participation in some social activities, such as compulsory community labor and services. To some extent, this will make them more aware of their mistakes and have better self-reflection, and also in the process of realizing the great significance of good behaviours, they can develop in a positive and healthy direction in the future.

重点表达

arouse people's deep concern,

corresponding moral education ,

attach importance to…,

make sb more vulnerable to,

are exposed to ,

psychological distortion,

题目评价

难度一般

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