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托福写作真题:医疗保健案例范文分享

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托福考试当中,写作考试项目是最后一个考试科目,可能这个时候很多考生的精力都用得差不多了,但是托福考试的成绩每个考试部分都比较平均,你丢掉哪个部分你的托福总分都不行,那么你在备考时就需要每个部分同等对待。那么备考时你要做些什么呢?小编认为写作真题范文必不可少。

托福考试有一个大家都知道的规律,就是不断重复考题,例如2017年9月24日考试当中的每一套题目都是在历年来新托福考试当中都出现过的,那么大家备考时就需要复习这些真题很有必要。今天小编这就在这里为大家整理了2017年上半年所有托福独立写作真题,并附有范文,希望对大家的托福写作备考有帮助。


托福写作真题:医疗保健案例范文分享

2017年上半年年托福写作范文汇总:

托福写作题目为:The mostimportant thing for government to improve health care is to clean theenvironment。下面大家一起来看看托福写作真题的分析及范文。

2017年上半年托福写作真题题目:

6月4日托福独立写作考情回顾

1.独立写作考察题型为绝对词类,解题技巧选择不同意观点,找另外解决方法

2.题干中涉及到一个目的状语为提升人们的健康,同学们考试的时候要注意不要忽略掉

3.考试过程中解题思路搞定后,立即写出文章结构:开头段+让步段+论点1,2+结尾段,紧接着补全全文。

4.中间段注意例子以及细节补充。

5.下面是范文,大家可以参考下。

6月4日托福写作真题回忆&参考范文

真题回顾

The mostimportant thing for government to improve health care is to clean theenvironment.

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题目大意:对政府来说,提升公众医疗保健最重要的是去清洁环境。此题目为绝对词的题目,波波建议选择不同意,采用承认合理性,反驳绝对性的结构来写作。具体来说,承认合理性,即承认清洁环境在健康保健方面的重要性;反驳绝对性,通过给出其他可以提升健康保健的方式来驳掉清理环境是最重要的方式。

托福写作模板及参考答案:

托福写作范文参考一:

6月4日托福独立写作范文

Do you agree or disagree: The most important thing for government to improve health care is to clean the environment.

As economy advances, the consequences caused by industrial development become starker and various environmental problems cover the whole world. Then comes one of the most serious issues that people’s health is confronted with huge challenges. Surely, a number of solutions have been raised and discussed and as for whether the most important thing for the government to improve health care is to clean the energy, I cast doubt on it.

Undeniably, cleaning the environment is an effective way to ensure people’s health. For instance, if the air pollution can be bridled, there will be fewer chances for citizens living in Beijing or TianJin suffering the respiratory diseases. Besides, citizens in Flint City could drink clean water if the water source was not acidified to erode the pipeline of tap water. However, the threats human beings are faced with do not only come from the environmental problems and the government has to lay more emphasis on the other two areas.

For one thing, the outbreak of viruses that could sparkle off widespread epidemics is a killer to human beings. Reflecting history can help us explore how the devastating viruses tortured human beings and the death toll was astounding. For instance, the once spread of cholera once caused the death of more than a million civilians in Russia and malaria is a kind of serious malady that could cause the death of several hundred thousand in Africa in the past. The good news is those viruses were under control finally after the efforts made by numerous medical experts. However, in recent years, people are still under huge threats of many newly found viruses like Ebola, Zika that still remain highly dangerous and could trigger huge damage to people’s physical health. Even worse, a reported man in America was found dying of Zika virus. Therefore, it is more urgent and indispensable for the government to invest to the development of medical technology.

For another thing, while analyzing the influence factors leading to the sub-health of most city employees, the deficiency in engaging sports can be found as one of the primary contributors. Therefore, there is necessity for the government to build more available sporting facilities nearby the communities for city workers who have to be fully involved in their career and cannot vacate enough time to either go to Gym or farther places for exercises. Take friends around me as an example. Most of them cannot afford to spend time in playing sports, one of who called Jason working as a software engineer can only get off work till 10 o’clock PM. Another friend of mine has to travel across the country for business trips several times a month. The combination of long-term involvement in career and no chance to work out lead to the obesity and the declining immunity. However, if there is a public Gym constructed around my friends’ residency, the possibilities of doing exercises could be higher and the physical conditions could be better. Accordingly, to maintain the physical health of citizens, it is more practical for the government to invest more to the construction of sports infrastructure as far as my friends are concerned.

In a word, even though cleaning environment means a lot to the citizens’ health care, developing medical technology and building sporting facilities can be more related to our health.


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