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托福写作中易犯的错误

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托福写作中易犯的错误有哪些?小编今天就为大家整理有关内容,希望给托福考生们增加一定的帮助。


托福写作中易犯的错误

 

 

1、用词不当

 

学生们在托福写作中或多或少都会有一些用词不当的问题,但是要注意的是一些较较基本的错误是不能犯的。

 

  

In the showif participators answer twenty problems that the host mentioned correctlythey will get five hundreds thousand US dollars as a prize

 

  

problems应改为questions

 

  

2、拼写错误

 

  

还请备战托福考试的同学们注意,这里的拼写错误不是指在考试时候的误打,而是本身对词汇拼写记忆的错误。

 

  

In conclusionissue of whether parents are the best teachers is a complex onerequiring subjective judgementconsequentlythere are no easy or certain answers

 

  

judgement应改为judgment

 

  

3、乱用大词

 

  

First of allchildren can earn money from their jobsalthough there isnt too muchbut they will keep their salary gingerliness

 

  

这里的gingerliness根本是不知所云。该句子还有以下问题:

 

  

1)该作文题目是讲学生是否应该做兼职,因此children的出现就显得很莫名其妙;

 

  

2)althoughbut是不能连用的;

 

  

3)指代不明,they不知道是指代前面的什么;

 

  

4.表达中式

 

  

The second argument-it might have been noticed by others-is that in some occasion it is quite difficult to compare parents to teachers because parents are a kind of people teachers are a kind of vocation.

 

  

5.表意重复

 

  

They shocked their friends devastated their families crushed their best friends.

 

  

前面已经提到了朋友,后面又提到朋友。

 

  

The show is so compelling but attractive.

 

  

compellingattractive是同义词,所以这里这么写就让人不明白。

 

  

6.固定用法错误

 

  

To some extends I agree with the authors general assertion that if parents also have a comprehensive sense of professional knowledge.

 

  

——To some extends应改为To some extent

 

  

7.例证夸张

 

  

For example when a doctor faces a patient who has got cancer the doctor cannot tell the truth for the truth may cause the patients immediate death.

 

  

虽然善意的谎言是必要的,但是其功效显然没有这么大。

 

  

8.成分多余

 

  

According to a comprehensive investigation which is carried out by Chinese Academy of Social Sciences shows that there is an increase in the number of university students who are taking part-time jobs.

 

  

该句中的shows that是多余的成分。

 

  

9.词性混乱

 

  

However the questions such as "Have you ever regretted marrying your husband" may be very privacy and embarrassingly.

 

  

句子中的privacyembarrassingly应该改成privateembarrassing

 

  

10.文体不正式

 

  

All of the players gonna to tell the truth in attempt to win $500000.

 

  

——gonna过于口语化。

 

  

In addition I think people shoudnt always tell the truth to others.

 

  

——在托福作文中尽量不要用缩写,这里应该写should not

 

  

11.两个独立句子间无连词

 

  

Another point is that young people are more aggressive and energetic and its suitable for them to choose such jobs which will provide them with rich experience that is essential for their future success.

 

  

这个错误犯的频率相当高,一定要注意。

 

  

12.时态错误

 

  

托福大作文一般使用现在时态,除了拿过去事件作为例子用过去时态。

 

  

Some people claimed that news media has enormous influence and is a detrimental creation.

 

  

—— claimed应该改为claim

 

  

13.不知所云

 

  

They also mention that in modern society there are too much entertainment bothering them as the huge gap lying between them and the success.


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