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  大部分考生备考托福写作都会选择范文来借鉴学习,小编为大家整理了几篇。不过在给出托福写作范文之前,小编想先跟大家聊聊托福写作范文的使用办法:怎么去高效的利用范文来进步自己托福写作水平。

  托福写作范文的重要性可以按照其分数来分辨,一般来说,范文中4分和5分的文章是较有价值的,因为能够达到这个分数水平的文章已经是达到了很高水平的文章。对于这些文章大家就不能只是简单的熟读和背诵了,而是需要逐字逐句分析体会作者的写作思路及修辞用法。另外小编还需要提醒大家一点,ETS对范文的评论也往往都是非常精彩的,一些意见看法都很有学习价值,建议大家参考,这会非常有利于理解托福写作的考试重点。
  范文多看才能跟上写作思路
  俗话说读书破万卷下笔如有神,等我们真正写作练习到一定的程度,那么写作的顺手也就是自然而然的事了。所以考生在阅读范文时也需要进步量。大家可以通过大量阅读范文来形成一些思维习惯,比如看到某个题就能想到要怎么展开,一些优质的句式用词能够信手拈来。之所以要这么做,是因为托福写作的考试时间很紧张,如果能提前养成一些写作方面的思维习惯就能有效减少构思的时间,更顺利的写出文章。
  看范文也要结合练习自我批改
  同一个题目,考生自己写出的文章在质量上大多是很难和范文媲美的。因此,考生也需要学会结合范文来修改自己的文章。特别是在同一题目自己练过一遍同时也有范文可以参考的时候,考生如果能通过对比来发现自身的不足并进行修改,就等于得到了一篇吸收了范文精华的好文章。而如果大家不勤修改自己的文章,就不知道自己原来的漏洞和不足在哪,只是闷头写自然也难有进步。
  接下来是几篇范文:
  写作题目:The most important factors that affect the lasting time of friendship
  1. help each other on crisis or when things go wrong
  2. have same interests
  3. trust each other completely
  范文及解析:
  Friendship is something we should cherish, since true friends are the most intimate persons in our life besides family members. Therefore, it is crucialto find out how to maintain the long-lasting friend. Among the three options, helping each other on crisis or when things go wrong, having same interests and trusting each other completely, the first one hits my consideration perfectly.
  友谊是我们应该珍惜的东西,因为真正的朋友是我们生活中除了家庭成员之外较亲密的人。因此,找出如何维持长久友谊是至关重要的。在这三种选择中,在危机中互相帮助,在事情出错时互相帮助,拥有相同的兴趣,完全信任对方,*个选择非常符合我的想法。
  Getting helps from friends when coming across crisis related to study could help consolidate the relationship between students and their friends - their classmates. Firstly, students often meet problems when trying to do their homework, since some of the questions they may not be able to solve and the deadline for the submission is almost there. If their classmates could sit down together and explain to them what would be the right equation to get applied to the math problem, or how to explain the chemistry phenomenon, it would be a relief for them and they would be grateful to their friends, causing to reinforce the friendship. Also, when the time for the exam is coming, a student who hasn’t finished the review would be so worried, and he urgently need the help from a friend to show him the most important key points covered by the teacher to pass the exam. They would appreciate this friend to a great extent, saying to his own heart that this guy would be my best friend forever. Talking about the application for universities, due to the intense competition, one student might be rejected by his dreamed school and get trapped in the emotion of depression. Under such circumstance, if his classmates could say some words to him that he deserves a better school since he is the best one, he could be encouraged to move on, and cherish the relationship with these friends more. Obviously, helps from classmates, who are also friends, in the period of crisis could let students know the importance of friends and so as to facilitate a long-lasting friendship.
  当遇到与学习有关的苦难时,得到朋友的帮助可以帮助巩固学生和他们的朋友、同学之间的关系。首先,学生在做作业的时候经常会遇到问题,因为有些问题他们可能无法解决,提交的截止日期也快到了。如果他们的同学可以一起坐下来向他们讲解如何使用正确的方程解决数学问题,或如何讲解化学现象,这是“危难”时候的帮助,他们会感激他们的朋友,友谊也会练习。还有,当考试时间到了,没有复习完的学生会很着急,他迫切需要朋友的帮助,如果有朋友帮他圈出老师划的重点,帮他通过考试。他们会很感谢这位朋友,他会对自己说,他将永远是我较好的朋友。谈到申请大学,由于竞争激烈,一个学生可能会被他梦想中的学校拒绝,陷入抑郁的情绪。在这种情况下,如果他的同学能安慰他几句,告诉他有更好的学校等着他,因为他是很棒。朋友鼓励让他继续前进,也让他更珍惜与这些朋友的关系。显然,在危机时期同学们的帮助,可以让他们知道朋友的重要性,从而促进持久的友谊。
  Also, employees could develop the long term friendship with friends who could offer them hands for solving difficulties. When a programmer gets trapped in trying to find a hidden bug in his codes, he would be desperate, and if his friend, one colleague who is also a software engineer, could spend the whole night to be by his side for checking the codes together and finally locate the bug, he would be moved greatly. The relationship between them could be more firm. Also, it is not difficult to imagine a salesman would be in a status of worrying about failing to complete the sale performance. With this situation, if his best friend in the same company could share his own clients’ information <http://top.zhan.com/cihui/ielts-information.html> and guide him to them to increase the chance for the sales, this guy would appreciate such help and remember this forever. In addition, probably a designer would meet difficulty to produce an artwork to satisfy a special need from the client, while if her friend knowing about her problem through talking with her and taking her to go shopping and playing for the aim to let her abandon the bothering matters. The refreshment actually could help inspire the creativeness of the designer and finally work out the artwork. She would thank to this friend and swear to to the same thing as pay back to her, helping the better maintain the relationship.
  此外,员工之间回向那些向他们伸出援手之人发展长期的友谊。当一个程序员被困在试图找到一个隐藏在他的代码里的错误,他会感到绝望。如果他的朋友,一个同事也是一个软件工程师,可以花整个晚上一起在他身边检查代码,较后定位错误,他将很感动,他们之间的关系可能会更加稳固。而且,不难想象一个*人员会担心无法完成*业绩。在这种情况下,如果他在同一家公司的较好的朋友可以分享他自己的*,并引导他给他增加*机会,这个人会很感激这样的帮助,永远记住这一点。此外,设计师可能会遇到制作艺术品的困难,以满足客户的特殊需求,而如果她的朋友通过与她交谈,带她去购物和玩耍来了解她的问题,让她放弃困扰的事情。这种茶点实际上可以激发设计师的创造力,较终做出艺术品。她会感谢这个朋友,并发誓要用同样的东西回报她,这也有助于维持更好的维持关系。
  Obviously, everyone would meet difficult moments, and if friends could offer hands at this time, the friendship would never get faded out.
  显然,每个人都会遇到困难的时刻,如果朋友们能在这个时候伸出援手,友谊就永远不会消失。
  以上就是小编清妍整理的托福写作范文以及范文使用办法,希望对大家的备考有一点帮助。

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