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第四套


考题回忆: 
Parents learn more from children than children learn from parents. 

这道题重复了2020.2月第4周家考题目。

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参考提纲:
总观点:Reasonable as the statement seems, I disagree with it.

让步段:It is tempting to believe parents can learn more from children, for children are more adapted to the modern world than their parents. + 当父母还不知道如何使用智能手机的时候,孩子们已经熟练地用*揭晓的iPhone自拍了take selfies. 这个时候,父母肯定需要孩子们的instruction. + However, it is an exaggeration to believe what children can teach their parents is more than what they can gain from their parents. 

分论点2:Having worked for decades, parents are experienced enough to give us mature advice when we bump into obstacles at work.
— When taking the first job, it is normal for a new graduate to feel overwhelmed, for his boss usually does not have the patience to explain how to do work in detail and cut him slack when mistakes occur. Under such a helpless situation, parents are in the best position to tell his depressed child that it usuaully takes a few days before getting used to the fast-paced working life. (写作团day9 语料)

分论点3:Parents also can guide us on how to deal with a complicated relationship, especially when it comes to romantic ones.
—Parents have been married for a long time. 他们知道如何去安慰一个情绪波动suffer from mood swings的朋友,知道如何合适地处理跟girlfriend的争吵以免事情变得更糟糕. 这些都不可能是父母从孩子身上能学到的. 

第五套

考题回忆: 
Students in a university club want to help others, but they can only choose one project a year, which one of the following is the best?

-help those students in a nearby primary school with reading and mathematics;

-help people who cannot afford to build or rent a home to build a house;

-visit and assist elderly people with daily tasks.


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这道题重复了2021.2月第1周家考题目。 这道题的考题分析再次推送给大家。 

参考提纲:

总观点:I would definitely go for teaching children reading and mathematics in elementary schools. 


中间段1:With the help from college students, primary school children could acquire knowledge more efficiently.  (写作团day9-展开训练-练习题目)


中间段2: College students themselves are also beneficiaries. 大学生从教导小孩子过程中学会了耐心。 


中间段3: It is true that helping people without shelter build a house would provide them with warm homes, and helping senior citizens do daily chores would provide them with much convenience. However,.... 


第六套


考题回忆: 

Do you agree or disagree with the statement:

Many people nowadays spend too much money on their pets (dogs, cats, or other animals), although there are better uses for their money.

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参考提纲:
总观点: 同意。即使有更好的花钱方式,很多人还是在他们宠物上花很多钱。

 

中间段1:主要原因是忙碌又孤独的现代人把宠物看成自己的家人,所以愿意给他们花很多钱。现代人每天的都忙于上班,学习,很少有机会去跟朋友和家人聚一聚hang out with friends。经常是拖着drag疲倦的身体回到空无一人的家里。而这个时候,他们会很感激家里有一只狗狗或者猫猫在热烈地等着他们回家。所以这也不奇怪,他们愿意给自己的宠物买较好较贵的食物等,来弥补它们耐心地,如家人一般的等待。

 

中间段2:其次,宠物也能给他们的主人带来了很多安慰。所以作为奖赏,主人们也会给他们花很多钱。比如,当一个程序员因为编写的程序出了很多bug而被老板裁员失去工作的时候,他的猫猫往往会走过去陪着他而不是走开。当一个孩子因为成绩没考好被父母责骂的时候,他的狗狗也会舔干他伤心的泪水。宠物是不会离开自己的家人,不管在什么情况下。所以,他们的主人都愿意自己省吃俭用去给宠物买较好的玩具和食物等。

 

中间段3. 人们的收入进步了也contribute to this phenomenon.... 


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