独立写作分析
审题分析
1. 题目的意思是：人们are obsessed with 痴迷于买material things like expensive clothes的原因是 or 不是因为“they think others will judge them based on what they possess”。
2. material things (like expensive clothes or cars): 物质/有形的产品, 比如Prada 衣服，特斯拉Tsela汽车；潮牌Supreme 等…
区别于无形的产品，比如看一场电影,健身….和便宜的普通日常产品，比如优x库的家居服等.
3. 题型：这是一个因果逻辑题型。可切入的角度比较多。
4. 总观点选择：
--同意。就同意这个因果链。
通过举例证明这个因果链。比如，人们买奢侈品。特斯拉汽车。潮牌等，就是因为其他人会根据这些物品，judge他们的工作收入，品位，是否成功等。
--不同意。不同意这个原因。是其他原因导致人们买这些产品。
比如，因为收入提升了有购买力，因为想提升生活水平；因为质量好；因为喜欢；因为受广告影响等….
总观点：不同意。
中间段1：Admittedly, others’ judgment exerts a subtle influence on people’s shopping choices…However, it is not the reasondriving people to purchase expensive quality goods in the first place.
中间段2：The major reason for people’s obsession with shopping is their handsome salaries. Although a young graduate may save be able to several months of salaries to buy a Chanel chain bag to show off her accomplishment among her colleagues, her humble income cannot allow her to squander any more on clothes or fancy sports cars, even though those may add to her image. Instead, she may have to suffer from it, living in a cheap apartment far away from the workplace or eating leftovers. Therefore, only when people with handsome income can they consistently afford those adorable clothes or cars which will cost them a fortune.
中间段3：Another equally important reason is that people are hard to resist the temptation that advertisements put. Much as people may pride their good tastes, they are no longer free to choose the things they want. For example, after a long exhausting day, people tend to sit on their comfortable sofa, watching several episodes of amusing television soap operas. Then, the carefully devised advertisements come in, endorsed by admirable idols, telling that they should reward themselves for hard work with a newly released electrical car- Tesla to drive them to work. Egged on by those compelling advertisement (写作团day12), people may unconsciously make orders, buying a lot of goods they do not need.
