比较难的新题！| 3.14托福线下写作考情分析

2021-08-04 13:52:45 来源：网络 作者：朗阁小编

今天的考试，比较难。 独立写作是一个政府类的新题。有些难度。 竟然问的老人, 有*的家庭,和失业的年轻人,谁更难. 政府应该给谁更多的资金支持... 简直是比惨大会啊... 但是，大家可以切入的角度非常多。所以也降低了难度。

今天的考试，比较难。

独立写作是一个政府类的新题。有些难度。 

竟然问的老人, 有*的家庭,和失业的年轻人,谁更难. 政府应该给谁更多的资金支持...  简直是比惨大会啊...

但是，大家可以切入的角度非常多。所以也降低了难度。 

综合写作，也是有些难度。出现了新的术语。

如果你对托福学习 有兴趣，请联系我们的老师~

(2). “下面哪类人*需要政府的资助-- 比较3个选项哪个*困难+*需要钱

(3). 三选一，每个选项的分析 

1. 不工作的older people  （70岁以上

--①已经退休没有工作收入了。②老年人一般身体不好+患有比较严重的疾病，所以需要额外的资金支持来支付医药单，看护人员等等的费用。

--不需要的原因：①老年人都有退休金和年轻的存款；②还有子女照顾他们。

2. 年轻有小孩small children的家庭

--需要的原因：①他们的经济负担确实很重，包括房贷，车贷和小*的学费，照顾生病在床的老人等。②他们的收入也相对有限。尤其是有些家庭的妻子可能需要放弃工作来照顾*，家庭收入就更少了。 ③政府多给资助，这样做可以鼓励年轻人多生*。

--不需要的原因：①年轻夫妇都很容易找到工作，收入就可以负担整个家庭的开支。比其他2个group的经济状况好很多。 ②并且他们的收入还会随着工作经验的增加而显著*。

3. 暂时性失业的年轻人young workers who recently lose their job.

--需要：没有收入，可能生活很艰难—被房东赶出，..

--不需要：①暂时失业，可以通过积蓄过一段时间；②失业*险；父母朋友的救济；③可以激励年轻人努力去*自己，找到工作。

中间段1：Those young families with children shoulder the heaviest financial burden than the other two candidates. Beside daily expenditure, they also have to pay the big mortgage for a bigger house to accommodate the family, afford expensive additional tutoring to improve their children’s position in the queue for a better school（写作团day1素材）, or cover a huge medical bill if a parent happens to be in a sickbed. The heavy burden is very likely beyond the reach of a young couple who are struggling to makes ends meet(day10素材). No wonder my wanderlust（旅行癖） friend gives up traveling after his first child was born, leading a frugal life now. … 

中间段2：Admittedly, the old above 70  necessitate a large amount of money to support themselves. Without income, they may also suffer from serious illnesses, such as heart disease, obesity, diabetes, resulting in large medical bills. Lacking the ability to take care of themselves, they may have to live in a nursing home. However, they in fact may be better off(富裕；境遇好) than the other two groups. Having worked for many years, the old often have substantial savings on deposits. What’s more, they can choose to live with their offspring.

中间段3：The government should not be concerned by those unemployed young people. Admittedly, losing their job at the 20s is not a blessing, they may be kicked out of their apartment by the landlord for a rent long-overdue, and skip meals to save money. However, this period of hard life may drive them to reflect on where goes wrong and work harder to avoid fall into the same situation again.

如果你对托福学习 有兴趣，请联系我们的老师~