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福州雅思最新写作真题解析(二)

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福州雅思最新写作真题解析(二)


  Some people think children should obey the rulestheir parents and teachers set and listen to them, but others think lesscontrol will help children to deal with their own future life. Discuss bothviews and give your own opinion.

  审题:

  题目翻译:有些人认为小孩子需要遵守和听从父母和老师指定的规则。然而另外一些人则认为对小孩少一点的限制会有利于他们更好的处理和解决未来生活中的问题。讨论两个观点并且给出你个人的看法。

  能力考查:这个教育类话题是双边讨论的考试指令,考查学生是否能对于考官所呈现的两个观点进行有效的论证及对比。这个题目中一般都会有标志性词眼,例如some people believe…, while others think…。就这类题目的答题要点来说,我们会建议四段式结构,包括开头引入,两个观点的分别论证及结尾段给出你自己的看法。

  题目关键词:rules,parents, teachers

  框架构造:

  1. 开头段(用于引出两个观点所争论的内容)

  2. 论证第一个论点的合理性,即小孩子需要遵守和听从父母和老师指定的规则

  3. 论证第二个观点的合理性,即对小孩少一点的限制会有利于他们更好的处理和解决未来生活中的问题

  4. 结尾段(给出个人观点)

  Sample answer:

  In most Chinese families, it is common to find that parents and teachersplay a dominant role in children’s lives, which means they have strictdisciplines on children. While some people approve of this, others hold theopposite attitude that less control is more important in children’s futuregrowth.

  Those people who advocate of imposing rules on children have their ownreasons. They may think that it is the most effective way for children to developgood behaviors at a very young age. In other words, these rules can help themto be good social members in the future. For example, much control on the useof computers and mobile phones is conducive to children’s physical and mentalhealth. Also, learning how to be polite and respectful to others can beconsidered as an important skill in children’s future career, as they willinevitably get along with different people, such as colleagues or clients.

  However, there are still some people thinking that too much control is notbeneficial to children. Instead, parents and teachers should give them morefreedom to decide their personal affairs; otherwise, they may heavily rely onthese rules and may not be able to solve problems on their own. For instance,if children get used to obey their parents, they dare not to make anychallenges in their future job, which is a fatal weakness to employers, whoshow their preference on those creative applicants.

  My view is that imagination and independence are quite necessary forchildren if they want to be productive members in the society. As aconsequence, instead of giving too much control, which deprives children of thechances to practice these skills, parents and teachers are advised to givechildren more support to take adventures.

  思路分析:

  Introduction:

  In most Chinese families, it is common to find that parents and teachersplay a dominant role in children’s lives, which means they have strictdisciplines on children.(用中国家庭举例,引出题目背景) While some people approve of this, others hold theopposite attitude that less control is more important in children’s futuregrowth.(重新改写了题目,但是没有发表观点,这部分观点的表达可以放在结尾段去重点描述)

  Body 1:

  主题句:Those people who advocate of imposing rules onchildren have their own reasons.(对于原题第一论点的改写,指出规则对于小孩的重要性)

  支撑论点部分:They may think that it is the most effective wayfor children to develop good behaviors at a very young age. In other words,these rules can help them to be good social members in the future.(解释论证) For example; much control on the use of computers and mobile phones isconducive to children’s physical and mental health.(举例论证1)Also, learning how to be polite and respectful to others can be consideredas an important skill in children’s future career, as they will inevitably getalong with different people, such as colleagues or clients.(举例论证2, 用2个例子更加直观和有效地论证中心论点)

  Body 2:

  主题句:However, there are still some people thinking thattoo much control is not beneficial to children.(用however转折连接词引出与上段不同的看法,指出了另外一部分人的看法)

  支撑论点部分:

  Instead, parents and teachers should give them more freedom to decide theirpersonal affairs; otherwise, they may heavily rely on these rules and may notbe able to solve problems on their own.(用otherwise引出对比论证,体现出规则对于小孩的问题)For instance, if children get used to obey theirparents, they dare not to make any challenges in their future job, which is afatal weakness to employers, who show their preference on those creativeapplicants.(举例论证,引出创新在工作中的重要性)

  Conclusion:

  My view is that(用这个连接词来重点表达自己的观点) imagination and independence are quite necessaryfor children if they want to be productive members in the society. As aconsequence, instead of giving too much control, which deprives children of thechances to practice these skills, parents and teachers are advised to givechildren more support to take adventures.(在结尾段亮明自己的态度)

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