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*较讨厌的雅思写作开头是什么?

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  知道为什么你的雅思写作分低么?为什么学习了那么多技巧并无卵用?用了好多华丽辞藻仍是万年5.5?下面我们就来看一下*较讨厌的十种雅思写作开头是什么?

  

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      一、中式英语

  用中式英文开头,不仅会让*看不懂,还暴露了你的语言功底,语料积累匮乏,是雅思写作中的大忌。

  比如:

  写作主题 1

  The happiest moment in your life

  案例:In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……

  写作主题 2

  The population problem

  案例:The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.

  写作主题 3

  Is there fairness in today’s business world?

  案例:I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things……

  二、胡乱翻译我国俗语

  胡乱翻译我国俗语会起反作用,毕竟*对我国俗语并不“感冒”,反而会引起*反感。

  比如:

  写作主题 1

  Is it good to have a large family?

  案例:I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”……

  写作主题 2

  Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family?

  案例:Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rat’s son can make hole……

  写作主题 3

  The advantage of being a nice person

  案例:I believe one sentence:“A good person is all life safe”. We Chinese people always say: “Good has good pay, bad has bad pay”.

  三、超级啰嗦

  开篇就要主题明了清晰,上来就啰啰嗦嗦表达不清,*自然认为你的观点模糊,甚至不会表达。

  比如:

  写作主题 1

  Should college students be allowed to get married?

  案例:This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……

  写作主题 2

  Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information?

  案例:Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life.

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