2、分号——并列、递进、比较
* For many enviromentalists, the world seems to be getting worse. They have developped a hit-list of our main fears: that natural resources are running out; that the population is ever growing, leaving less and less to eat; that species are becoming extinct in vast numbers, and that the planet’s air and water are becoming ever more polluted.
上面句子中从二句开始,整段结构用标点可浓缩为 “:…;…;…and…”。 如果中学生来写,会不会又时间就想到了“for example, first,…in additon…last but not least”呢? 很明显,例子中用到的分号不但起到了简单的并列作用,更因为其结构紧凑齐整,给人以紧迫感,更好地突出了“main fears”。再看一个例子:
Some corpora attempt to cover the language as a whole, taking extracts from many kinds of text; others are extremely selective, providing a collection of material that deals only with a particular linguistic feature.
本例中的分号=while, meanwhile, in the mean time…等连接前后形成鲜明对比的一些连接词。在写作中完全可以用这样一个小小的标点来实现连接词的多样化啊。
学以致用:
& It is now accepted that young women should find work on leaving school; indeed to rely totally on their parents’ financial support is no longre an option in many families. (引自剑桥全真题范文)
3、括号——解释说明、信息插入
Other substances were then introduced: including fillers, such as woodlflour, asbestos or cotton, which increase strength and moisture resistance, catalysts (substances to speed up the reaction between two chemicals without joining to either) and hexa, a compound of ammonia and formaldehyde which supplied the additonal formaldehyde necessary to form a thermosetting resion.
本例中标注黑体的部分均起到了解释说明前面的中心名词的作用。不难看出,括号很直观的告诉读者,括号内部的内容为解释说明或插入的作用。这样括号是不是起到了突出层次感、使结构更清晰的作用了呢?!
学以致用:
& In general, students in country A spent slightly more than those in country B(US$5000 and US$ 4500 respectively). (引自范文房挺老师)
总之,因为雅思全真题解析中的阅读文章都是原汁原味的英文文章,同学们可以通过这些文章学习标点符号的妙用,并把它们用在写作中。这样就可以利用标点符号和连接词让你的作文更有native Speaker作文的自然、顺理成章感觉,不光对雅思作文,对任何作文都会有很大的提升的。