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  雅思写作范文篇一:与父母同住

  Task:In some countries, more and more adults are continuing to live with  their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the  advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

  Sample answer:

  Nowadays, an increasing number of adults choose to live with their parents  after finishing their academic tasks and finding jobs. The overall effect of  this phenomenon is negative, although the younger generation can get much help  from their parents.

  It is widely acknowledged that living with parents contributes to relieve  young adults’ strains and stresses. They bear great pressure from their work and  study, and are not willing to adapt to an independent life. The parents,  especially the retired adults, are always ready to prepare everything for their  children, helping them to concentrate on their work. In addition, young people  can learn much experience from their parents who are more experienced in dealing  with interpersonal relationships and career development. As a new comer in the  working arena, the young generation are too naïve to manage their various  challenges. Undoubtedly, it is of great value for them to live with their  parents.

  On the other hand, continuing to live with parents will unavoidably cause  some conflicts. Growing up in two different times, the views and lifestyles  between these two generations are less likely to be the same. With the passage  of time, the family bond will be alienated. What’s worse, if the adults lead a  life with parents for a long time, they are particularly likely to have a  sentimental attachment to their parents excessively. It will be increasingly  difficult for them to start a new life when their parents cannot provide help  any longer. It is detrimental for forming a new family in the future.

  When considering the effects of living with parents on young generation, we  can conclude that this lifestyle is not universally suitable for every  individual. As to most young people, they had better to live independently in  order to keep a harmonious relation with parents and a balance between work and  life.

  雅思写作范文篇二:外出不安全

  Task:Many people do not feel safe either at home or they are out. What are  the causes, and what can be done to make people feel safer?

  Sample answer:

  Security is always a frequently talked topic in the modern society. Looking  into the factors leading to dangers helps people to protect themselves from  insecurity. This essay will mainly analyze the reasons for this problem and  provide some solutions.

  There are two main factors contributing to the phenomenon that more people  feel insecure. In general, the detailed description of violence on the mass  media should be responsible for this problem. When criminal cases such as  shooting, theft and driving after drinking are often reported on the TV, the  viewers’ safety and security will probably be threatened and they will be in the  belief that they are likely to subject to offenses at anytime. This problem can  also be attributed to the widespread use of mobile devices. With more  applications installed in people’s smart phones, they save too many secrets on  this device--the online bank passwords and the information of their social  network which may include significant business opportunities. It is not  exaggerated that their lives and property will be threatened if they lose their  precious mobile devices.

  To solve this problem, governments, police stations and citizens themselves  should cooperate with each other. First of all, the government should impose a  restriction on the representation of crimes, reducing the plots focusing on the  detailed description. The governments and police stations needs to set up a  security system, through which citizens’ personal information can be prevented  from being stolen. It is also of great essence that citizens should raise the  awareness of security.》》点击进入测试小课堂

  As mentioned above, the occurrence of crime on the mass media and the  storage of personal information on mobile devices are the main reasons for  insecurity. Governments, police stations and citizens should make a concerted  effort to address this issue.

  雅思写作范文篇三:商业搬到远郊

  Task:As the transportation and accommodation problem increases in big  cities, some governments are encouraging business move from the city to the  rural area, do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

  Sample answer:

  It is sometimes argued that some business should be removed from cities to  rural areas. Personally, I believe this has more benefits than drawbacks.

  Firstly, suburbs usually have better surroundings than urban areas. This is  because companies can provide their employees with a better office environment  and living condition there, which would enhance employees’ enthusiasm for work.  In addition, a comfortable office environment and living condition can decrease  frequency of talent-flowing and ensure companies’ development.

  Secondly, migrating some business to rural areas will make our cities a  better place to live in. Large factory buildings will cover urban places  extensively. If businesses relocate their factories to rural areas, these places  can be used to build roads, parks, hospitals and other public facilities, and  there might be less traffic jam in the rush hour. At the same time, governments  can plant more greenery to reduce air pollution. As a result, it provides  citizens with better air quality, which is beneficial for their health.》》点我领取在线免费试听课程

  However, we have to admit that this policy still exist some disadvantages.  Although moving some business to rural areas can ease traffic problems, it will  increase the cost of transportation for those who live in the remote areas.  Besides, the ecosystem in rural areas is quite fragile, the over-exploration may  cause irreversible damage to our environment if we fail to provide some  reasonable plans.

  In conclusion, I believe that moving some business to rural areas will  bring more advantages.

  雅思写作范文篇四:人人都能去南极

  Task:Nowadays both scientists and tourists can go to remote natural  environments such as the South Pole. Do you think the advantages of this  development outweigh the disadvantages?

  Sample answer:

  Unknown natural is always brimming with seductive scenery. Plenty of  researchers and travelers make trips to distant natural places, such as the  Mount Qomolangma, Antarctica and the North Pole. I am of the opinion that this  has more disadvantages than advantages.

  Discover of new areas always bring some irreparable destruction. Before the  South Pole is in the sight of public, it was once an uncharted territory. Since  its discovery, hundreds of explorers and scientists had taken adventures to this  wilderness. At the same time, their scientific expedition may leave some  geographical environment destruction there. And it is quite troublesome to make  up such destruction.

  Although travelers extremely enjoy the breathtaking natural landscape, they  bring along tremendous risks. One of the most common phenomenon of travelers is  producing pollution to local areas. As reported in many cases, holidaymakers  have left behind tons of waste in the Antarctica over the last century. They  will not only threaten the survival of many creatures, including endangered  species such as penguins and seals, but also cause irreversible damage to the  ecosystem.

  In addition, we cannot avoid the fact that untouched environments are  scientifically proved to have considerable oil and gas reserves. Currently, the  world fuel supply is running out in the next fifty years, and no countries will  help themselves from the temptation of these fuel resources. The greed of people  will drive them to drain out the resource in these regions, and by then places  like the South Pole will be truly deserted.

  In conclusion, I confirm that travelling to virgin land will bring far more  losses than gains.

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