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雅思考试写作技巧及注意事项

  句子、词语。

  文章由句子组成,句子由词语组成。在着手写文章之前,应该提醒自己注意下面几点:

  1)句子与词语的正确用法。这是较基本的一点。这里包括单字的正确拼写、词语在特定句子中的正确应用、正确的句子模式。注意:千万不要在文章中出现我国式的英语。这就要求在构思的时候不要用中文进行思考,写的时候要仔细斟酌文章的语句。

  2)句子的多样化。这点的实现必须在句子与词语的正确上来实现。句子的多样化是体现一个人英语语言水平的关键也是使文章获得*的重点。如非谓语从句、定语从句、宾语从句等,以及简单句、复杂句的综合使用。

  3)标点的正确使用

  文章的整体风格与气氛。

  作为*或者是阅读你文章的人,在*次接触到你文章时就可以感受到文章的特点与风格,或者活泼或者呆板,而依据模板写的文章很难做到活泼或者是吸引读者。

  *持书写的工整性与字迹。

  常见错误提醒

  一. 不一致(disagreements)

  所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致,它还包括了数的不一致 时态不一致及代词不一 致等.

  例1. when one have money ,he can do what he want to .

  (人一旦有了钱,他就能想干什么就干什么.)

  剖析:one是单数第三人称,因而本句的have应改为has ;同理,want应改为wants.本句是典型的主谓不一致.

  改为: once one has money ,he can do what he wants (to do)

  二. 修饰语错位(misplaced modifiers)

  英语与汉语不同,同一个修饰语置于句子不同的位置,句子的含义可能引起变化.对于这一点我国学生往往没有引起足够的重视,因而造成了不必要的误解.例1. i believe i can do it well and i will better know the world outside the campus.

  剖析:better位置不当,应置于句末.

  三. 句子不完整(sentence fragments)

  在口语中,交际双方可借助手势语气上下文等,不完整的句子完全可以被理解.可是书面语就不同了,句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清,这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后,笔者又想加些补充说明时发生.

  例1. there are many ways to know the society. for example by tv ,radio ,newspaper and so on .

  剖析:本句后半部分"for example by tv ,radio ,newspaper and so on .”不是一个完整的句子,仅为一些不连贯的词语,不能独立成句.

  改为:there are many ways to know society ,for example ,by tv ,radio ,and newspaper.

  四. 悬垂修饰语(dangling modifiers)

  所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清.例如:at the age of ten, my grandfather died. 这句中"at the age of ten"只点出十岁时,但没有说明” 谁”十岁时.按一般推理不可能是my grandfather, 如果我们把这个悬垂修饰语改明确一点,全句就不那么费解了.

  改为:

  when i was ten, my grandfather died.

  例1. to do well in college, good grades are essential.

  剖析:句中不定式短语 “to do well in college” 的逻辑主语不清楚.

  改为:

  to do well in college, a student needs good grades.

  五. 词性误用(misuse of parts of speech)

  “词性误用”常表现为:介词当动词用;形容词当副词用;名词当动词用等.

  例1. none can negative the importance of money.

  剖析:negative 系形容词,误作动词。

  改为:

  none can deny the importance of money.

  六. 指代不清(ambiguous reference of pronouns)

  指代不清主要讲的是代词与被指代的人或物关系不清,或者先后所用的代词不一致。试看下面这一句:

  mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.

  (玛丽和我姐姐很要好,因为她要她做她的伴娘。)

  读完上面这一句话,读者无法明确地判断两位姑娘中谁将结婚,谁将当伴娘。如果我们把易于引起误解的代词的所指对象加以明确,意思就一目了然了。这个句子可改为:

  mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.

  例1. and we can also know the society by serving it yourself.

  剖析:句中人称代词we 和反身代词yourself指代不一致。改为:

  we can also know society by serving it ourselves.

  七. 不间断句子(run-on sentences)

  什么叫run-on sentence?请看下面的例句。

  例1. there are many ways we get to know the outside world.

  剖析:这个句子包含了两层完整的意思:“there are many ways.” 以及“we get to know the outside world.”。简单地把它们连在一起就不妥当了。

  改为:

  there are many ways for us to learn about the outside world. 或:

  there are many ways through which we can become acquainted with the outside

  world

  八. 措词毛病(troubles in diction)

  diction 是指在特定的句子中如何适当地选用词语的问题,囿于教学时间紧迫,教师平时在这方面花的时间往往极其有限,影响了学生在写作中没有养成良好的推敲,斟酌的习惯。他们往往随心所欲,拿来就用。所以作文中用词不当的错误比比皆是。

  例1. the increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution.

  (农业方面化学物质使用的不断增加也造成了污染。)

  剖析:显然,考生把obstacles“障碍”,“障碍物”误作substance“物质”了。另外“the increasing use (不断增加的使用)” 应改为“abusive use (滥用)”。

  改为:

  the abusive use of chemical substances in agriculture also causes/leads to pollution.

  九. 累赘(redundancy)

  言以简洁为贵。写句子没有一个多余的词;写段落没有一个无必要的句子。能用单词的不用词组;能用词组的不用从句或句子。如:

  in spite of the fact that he is lazy, i like him.

  本句的“the fact that he is lazy”系同谓语从句,我们按照上述“能用词组的不用从句”可以改为:in spite of his laziness, i like him.

  例1. for the people who are diligent and kind, money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need.

  剖析:整个句子可以大大简化。

  改为:

  diligent, caring people use money only to buy what they need.

  十. 不连贯(incoherence)

  不连贯是指一个句子前言不对后语,或是结构上不畅通。这也是考生常犯的毛病。

  例1. the fresh water, it is the most important things of the earth.

  剖析:the fresh water 与逗号后的it 不连贯。it 与things 在数方面不一致。

  常见联词

  表层进

  first, firstly to begin with/second, secondly to start with/third, thirdly what's more/also and then/and equally important/besides in addition/further in the first place/still furthermore

  last but not the least/next besides/too moreover/finally

  表举例

  for example for instance/to illustrate as an illustration/after all/表解释/as a matter of fact/frankly speaking/in this case namely/in other words

  表总结

  in summary in a word/in brief in conclusion/to conclude in fact/indeed in short/in other words /of course/it is true specially/namely in all/that is to summarize/thus as has been said/altogether in other words/finally in simpler terms/in particular that is/on the whole to put it differently/therefore

  表强调

  of course indeed/above all most important/emphasis certainly in fact

  表让步

  still nevertheless/in spite of all the same/even so after all/concession granted naturally/of course

  表比较

  in comparison likewise/similarly equally/however likewise/in the same way/

  表转折

  by contrast although/e same time but/in contrast nevertheless/notwithstanding on the contrary

  on the other hand otherwise/regardless still/though yet/despite the fact that even so/even though for all that/however in spite of/instead

  表时间

  after a while afterward/again also/and then as long as/at last at length/at that time before/besides earlier/eventually finally/formerly further/furthermore in addition/in the first place in the past/

  last lately/meanwhile moreover/next now/presently second/shortly simultaneously/since so far/soon still/subsequently then/thereafter too/until until now/when

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