Describe a good experience of online shopping
You should say:
When it happened
What you bought
Why you bought it
And explain why you think it was a good experience
1.When it happened
I would like to describe a joyful shopping online experience which happened on last Singles Day, or 11/11—the biggest annual shopping holiday that takes place on November 11th. It was originally meant for people who wanted to celebrate being single. Though, much like Black Friday, it has turned into more of a retail event.
annual shopping holiday 每年的购物节
turn into 转变成
a retail event 零售活动，零售节
2.What you bought
I bought lots of things because you know, on Singles Day, products are much cheaper, during the 24-hour period, Alibaba offered huge discounts across its e-commerce sites such as T-mall. So I bought lots of necessities like shampoo, tissue, thermos and so on, also some make-up, clothes and shoes. The most important thing I bought last Double 11 was a kindle.
e-commerce sites 线上商业网站
3.Why you bought it
I bought those items because the discount was attractive, so we accumulated things we need in the online shopping cart and bought them at lower price on Singles Day. Second, it has become a popular holiday and buying something is how we celebrate it. Third, we bought these of course because we need them.
online shopping cart 网上购物车
4.And explain why you think it was a good experience
As I mentioned, it was a good experience is because I bought those products at much lower price and I bought all items I wanted, you know, within several seconds, some products would be sold out. To my surprise, my shopping arrived in 4 days which was really fast because after Double 11, delivery companies would be busy and goods usually spent more than 10 days to arrive. The most exciting thing was that I got a pair of shoes for free coz I was chosen to be a lucky costumer. What a good shopping experience!
delivery companies 物流公司