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托福考试Cat晚安呀，我是源自澳大利亚的托福助教Mac那时，给我们增添两个托福大试题专业课（2021年9月18日托福写作专业课）的创作者箴 。 3.2018托福小试题 狡蛛属，下列是节录产品目录： 1，试题2，写作文3，*分箴4，箴朗诵5，箴easie 托福写作大试题小试题分享
托福考试Cat晚安呀，我是源自澳大利亚的托福助教Mac那时，给我们增添两个托福大试题专业课（2021年9月18日托福写作专业课）的创作者箴 。
狡蛛属，下列是节录产品目录： 1，试题2，写作文3，*分箴4，箴朗诵5，箴easier词语展毛，主要包括：试题改述看法类大试题*分字词展现“词语多样度”的词语&词组展现“相联与并行”的词语&字词 6，托福写作礼包(
7.0版，大试题76页，小试题57页)*分箴，部份箴有音视频条码必不可少字词 、写作技巧备考急救箱托福Bilaspur记上题：Some experts suppose that when a country is already rich, any additional increase in economic wealth does not make its citizens happier. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
写作文：Type: Opinion 看法类大试题 (我的看法：for the most part, agree)Body 1: financial wealth allows for freedom of choice
Body 2: excessive choices and convenience lead to obesity, and narcissism, etc.
- Model Answer *分箴 & 箴朗诵 -It has often been cited byacademics that when a certain threshold of wealth is met within a nation, further growth
in national prosperity does not increase the general level of contentment within the population. For the most part, I agree with this assumption for the following reasons.
One of the main reasons some think increased wealth equates to increased happiness is that higher rates of monetary gain
can bring about a greater range of choices. While this might be true at an individual level, it does not always stand at
the macro level, as some of the wealthiest nations seem also to have some of the highest rates of conditions
normally associated with unhappiness. These ‘conditions’ include depression, suicide, obesity, narcissism
, and an increase in a general malaise of the people, and are evident in great numbers in wealthy countries such as the United States, Japan, and Canada, countries where the GDP has remained high for
decades. Despite this upward trend of despondency within many in the population in such countries, there is no doubt that a rise in a person’s financial
affluence can have a positive impact on their life. Increased wealth brings about a greater plethora of
not just choices, but also conveniences, affecting aspects such as living environment, consumer choices
, and sources of pleasure. Nevertheless, evidence seems to support the notion that despite increased national wealth, even when this economic
uptick reaches the populace directly, many people still slip into a malaise brought on by the lack of
purpose and materialism on the one hand, and an overabundance of convenience on the other. In conclusion, I believe that although many people are able to use an increase in
personal financial wealth to increase their life contentment, the same cannot be said, generally, for the population of a rich country with increasing prosperity, since many citizens will remain
void of a central guiding philosophy, for which is exacerbated by the array of choices and conveniences open to them, and hence, become
victims of dissatisfaction. - Essay Analysis 箴解析 -- (1) Introduction Paraphrasing from the Statement/Question 试题改述:
Some experts = academics suppose = It has often been cited bya country is already rich = a certain threshold of wealth is met within a nation
additional increases = further growtheconomic wealth = national prosperitymake its citizens happier = increase the general level of contentment
Standard Phrase for the “Opinion” type essay 看法类大试题*分字词：It has often been cited that…For the most part, I agree with this (assumption) for the following reasons.
Words showing Cohesion (C&C) 展现“相联与并行”的词语和词组:, that whenis met withinthisVocabulary*分easier词语和词组：a certain threshold of ……的两个临界点
prosperity 繁荣昌盛contentment 满足assumption 假想；设想；假设- (2) Body 1 -Aspects that must be referred to 这段需要提到：
additional increase in economic wealth does not make its citizens happier (agree)Standard IELTS essay phrase 托福高频字词：
One of the main reasons…is thatVocabulary and Collocations*分easier词语和词组：equates to 等于higher rates of 高利率monetary gain 金钱收益
a greater range of 更广的at an individual level 个人层次does not always stand at 不总是停留在macro (level) 宏观(层面)some of the….(also to have) some of the
normally associated with 通常与……相关depression 沮丧；抑郁；消沉suicide 自杀obesity 肥胖narcissism 自恋general malaise 周身不适
evident 明显的decades 数载Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (C&C) 展现“相联与并行”的词语和词组：
is thatbring aboutWhile this, it, as some of AlsoThese, andsuch as, countries where- (3) Body 2 -Aspects that must be referred to 这段需要提到：
The part I disagree with (from a ‘personal increase in wealth’ point of view) but must remain focused on a country (nation, society, overall economy). This shows a ‘dichotomy’ or ‘contrast’.
Standard IELTS essay phrase 托福高频字词：Despite this…there is no doubt that Vocabulary and Collocations *分easier词语和词组：
upward trend of 上升趋势despondency 丧气；失望affluence 富足a greater plethora of 更多的living environment 生活环境consumer choices 消费选择
sources of pleasure 快乐源泉evidence seems to support 普遍认为the notion that ……的观念uptick 上升；上涨the populace 大众；平民
slip into 进入；陷入the lack of (purpose) 缺乏*materialism 物质主义an overabundance of 过量的；过多的；过于多样的Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (C&C) 展现“相联与并行”的词语和词组：
Despite this…Suchtherenot just …, but also, affectingsuch asNeverthelessthat despite, even when thisstill
brought on byon the one hand, … on the other- (4) Conclusion -Standard IELTS essay phrase 托福高频字词：In conclusion, I believe that
Vocabulary and Collocations*分easier词语和词组：personal financial wealth 个人*经济财富life contentment 生活的满足感(the same) cannot be said (for)
void of 缺乏a central guiding principle 某种导向；某种指导原则exacerbated by 加剧；恶化the array of 各种各样的victims of ……的受害者
dissatisfaction 不满足Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (C&C) 展现“相联与并行”的词语和词组：
although, the same (cannot be said for), generally,, for which, and hence,become
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